I finally presented today…it seems that there is nothing wrong with my story flow, though my lecturer did comment that my dialogue was way too wordy and elaborate, and for a clip that should be two to three minutes in length, the dialogue may increase that time to six to eight minutes (yikeys!!). So I have to cut down on the dialogue a fair bit.
I thought about how I want to do up my frames, and what to do over the long weekend. As for frames/cels/scenes, I will draw the scenes and their frames in Photoshop, though for some of the scenes, I will do in Flash.
I am also thinking of changing the shot size for Panel 04 in my storyboard (yes, the one where the woman turns her head at the sound of the gun being clicked) as my lecturer pointed out that my proportions were off, and I can’t really draw full-shots of people sitting on chairs.
Maybe for the long weekend, I will hunt for sound effects, and if time permits, maybe start some production on a few scenes.
I guess this will be all for now…
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