I presented my animetics today, and this is the feedback I got from presenting:
* Background music is unsuitable, and redundant, so I guess I will have to chop off some music and save the music for the beginning (until the gunshot is heard against white) and credits.
* Sound effect for Shot 21 (officer looking shocked) is unsuitable and should be taken out.
* No Singlish please…guess I have to edit my script into proper English.
* My lecturer thinks it is best to offer tea first before revealing bullet wound on head…requires a re-arrangement of events but I have to see if I have enough time to make such a huge switch.
* Change my presentation name (Dominatrix Productions…? 0_0)
*Woman seems more psychotic than the husband
That is all for feedback, now I will go animate Shot 21 (Officer looking shocked)…
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