My lecturer saw me again today, and I showed her my completed scenes (the ones which I put into Flash then exported as Quicktime), and she also gave some ideas for changes:
* For Shot 07 (hand picking up phone), the hand coming down looked more like the right hand (thumb was shown) than the left hand it should be.
* For Shot 08 (police officer on phone), during the long pause, the officer should blink. Not only that, the grip on the phone looked wrong, and the phone looks more like a bone.
She also gave me some advice on character design, as my guidelines were off. She told me that it is best to draw out the guidelines and rough sketch of character first on paper, before scanning into Photoshop.
Well, I have eights shot left to do by this Sunday, so the next two weeks can be for editing, doing two extra shots, audio mixing and final compilation. So today, I plan to animate Shot 13 (officer's eye looks to side) and Shot 15 (officer' eyes widen). That's all for now...
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