I had presentation today, and it seems my Flash-ing out of scenes may have to wait a bit; apparently, I still have plenty of editing to do.
Seriously crushed, stressed, worried, angry, and a whole lot of negative emotions.
I do not have all the time in the world to take in everybody’s comments (everybody else has three days grace, not me), so guess I have to burn the midnight oil as usual to do the required editing, since I really want to Flash out my shots ASAP, preferably tomorrow:
• The living room the woman was in looked too tight and grey, like a prison cell.
• Foreshortening was not there in Shot 03 (gun raised)
• Shot 06 (gunshot is heard) should be black, and not white.
• For Shot 05 (eye widens), put a view of the gun in the iris to indicate it’s the woman’s eye
Yep, that will be the editing I have to do for tonight, and hopefully, I can start on Flash…
I did manage to record my own voice for my Officer’s VO, and lowered the pitch to make sound male, so I guess that is the silver lining from today’s cloud.
Never been so mad after a critique before…
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