Yes, I finally Flashed out all my shots!! (Happy Dance) Which is lucky that I finished the important stuff today…I consulted with my lecturer today, and though she is pleased with the improvements I made to some shots, she pointed out that there is still some editing to do. Also, Vivien helped to point out the ‘eyelash’ mistake (eyelashes, when in front, never go the same direction). So, I guess I should be making the necessary edits:
• For the Added Shot, my camera can just go up and down, instead of all over the place (I did not know a jerky shot can make a person vomit). More shadows should be added to add tonal value. Composition also needs to be adjusted.
• For the improved living room in Shot 02, the shadow should be replaced by an over-shoulder shot of the husband. More shadows to be added for tonal value.
• Eyelashes should be re-arranged that they do not go the same direction.
• Eye in Shot 05 should look more like an eye (rounder, iris circular, pupil dilates when scared)
• The gun in Shot 03 still looks wrong, as with the hand holding it. Needs reference…
I guess these are the changes I need to make…hope to finish making these changes by tomorrow, so that I can focus on final compilation….I need to hit the sack…zzzzz….
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